Its So Easy to Make Enemies and So Hard to Make Friends Lyrics
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| OP | lyrics for a song titled-"IT'S EASY TO MAKE ENEMIES"/(c)31.07.02/R. Thyer Verse1. Got out of bed with a smile. Verse2. Don't need more enemies, chorus: It's easy to make enemies, Bridge: I am feeling happy, Verse3. Walking down main street, Verse4. Shielas respond EAGERLY! Verse5. A sheila's coming along, [This message has been edited by Ray and Verell Thyer (edited 08-01-2002).] [This message has been edited by Ray and Verell Thyer (edited 08-02-2002).] [This message has been edited by Ray and Verell Thyer (edited 08-04-2002).] |
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| Ray, Yup, you're getting very "warm". I think if you give just a little more explaination as to why some folks hate such a "happy go lucky" feller, you'ld have yourself a real winner here! Suggestion: Maybe you could do that in the bridge. I could come up with some cool and very thought provoking ideas, but this time I'll let you sweat out the details. I know you'll have more fun that way. You keep on getting better and if you stick with it, you'll soon be dangerous! Great job bro, keep going and Michael P.S. Just an idea: ------------------ [This message has been edited by Michael Borges (edited 07-31-2002).] There's nothing remarkable about it. All one has to do is hit the right keys at the right time and the instrument plays itself. -- Johann Sebastian Bach MichaelBorges.com | |
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| Hi Ray! Man, you are so right! Take it from the Enemy King! Ha! I've made one or two along the way; that's for sure! Ray, you're asking for honesty so I'll tell you; this needs more work. You start out fairly well. But, your story keeps repeating itself. I've learned not to use any words in my verses/bridges that I use in my chorus. hook words/main rhymers that is. You steal the thunder from your chorus by doing so imo. Also, I find it hard to believe that a person can make enemies by smiling. Just the opposite in my book. So, I see a need to reconsider that idea as well. And, in reality it may even be easier to write too. man i WOKE UP this MORN ing Just for fun Ray. Ron Boyte | |
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| Pretty good Ray! I don't understand Cheers from Canada Trudi | |
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| HI Ray, G'mornin' Amigo! Good Start here... I was Scrollin' DOWN today Critiquin' Away, so saw Jimmy Ruddy's Version FIRST on this Topic..(Where he WAS Nice Enuf to give ya Credit for Inspiring HIS Version.) SEE How Jimmy set up his STORYLINE? You've BOTH Dealt with the SAME Angle... Jim's put a lot more MEAT on the Story's Bones... THIS you wanna DO so it's a More Interesting Story being told. Think ya overused that "Smile on my Dial" cute line, too..(UNLESS ya wanna make it your HOOK...& stick it in The CHORUS...) LIKE your Current Hook a Lot, tho...and IT's EASY MAKIN' ENEMIES is indeed a Great ANGLE...(Could write a DOZEN Different Songs from this Hook, alone, Buddy!) It's Easy Makin' Enemies It's Easy Makin' Enemies {Take It AWAY, RAY....!} ;-)> Good Luck with Rewrites on Your Song, Big Guy-Hug, | |
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| Hi, Ray and Verell. I saw this a few days ago and just have'nt got back. Just read Jimmy's and enjoyed reading HIS side of the story! It's Easy to Make Enemies is a good hook. You need to set it up more. Perhaps each verse could be a snapshot picture of a person you met and smiled at. "Got out of bed with a smile" is a strong line and should be your first line, imo. Good luck with this. Vondelle | |
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| Hi, I hope you don't mind being mentioned as the inspiration for the tune I wrote. I wasn't trying to draw out comparisons, just give respect to the song that inspired me. (I've been in the shoes of both people, the one who smiles and still makes enemies, and the one who is a complete grouch.) I hope you know I like the idea behind your song. It will be a very good song with a little more work. I'd like to see V2 Don't need more 'enemies' changed to 'troubles' or 'hassles' or a suitable auzzie term for this, because I find enemies a difficult word to sing, (That could be me!) and I think it doesn't do it justice to have it in both the chorus and verse. V1 I've tried using 'girlfriend' in songs, but it always sounds out of place. I eventually got married and stopped having to worry about it. Of course there is BNL 'Alternative Girlfriend', but hey, those guys are genius's anyways... but I don't know if it works here.... maybe it is OK, but I avoid that word like the plague. Thanks for the song! | |
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| OP | G'day Ronald, Trudi, Tampastan, Vondelle, Jimmy Ruddy. WOW! WOW! I AM OVERWHELMED BY YOUR ENTHUSIASTIC RESPONSES and |
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| OP | G'day Michael Borges, Marty, Ronald, Trudi, Tampastan,Vondelle,Jimmy Ruddy. I have meditated and this is what my pencil wrote down.My special thanks to Vondelle and Tampastan for their contributions which I have adopted and my sincere thanks to all of you. I guess that it is not yet perfect. I have kept the 'Aussie flavour', I hope youse don't mind. Please help me make this one as good as it can be. Thanks in advance for your great help. best wishes, Ray in Australia. |
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